Thursday, December 6, 2012

Feelin' Blue

I never knew what love is?
I always wondered what it was,
I once knew what it was,
I once felt what it was,
But I don't know what happened.

He said he'll give me everything,
He'll always be there for me,
He'll protect me,
He'll love me,
But that's what men always say.

My first mistreated me,
he made me do things
that a man is suppose to do.
My second treated me right,
loved me, then changed.

Why do I even try anymore?
No one likes me,
How I do things,
How I work.

Now look at me
I'm beaten down,
muted.
Will I ever find, what love truly is?

6 comments:

  1. I think in your past life you were a poet because that was pretty good!!!

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  2. It seems like your talking about yourself ? LOL Im just playing good job and this was longer than I expected. Also the part where you say "My first mistreated me.." At first that didn't make sense to me so maybe you could have approached that in a different way to get her point across?

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    1. Ok next time when I get to do this I'll keep this in mine, becasues I see how it could be confusing at first.

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